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No matter what situation Lennie gets himself into, George will always be there to help Lennie.  Lennie always means well, but all the facts sometimes aren’t produced in his words.  Instead of telling a little girl he liked her dress, he automatically went up and stroked the fabric scaring the girl. This resulted in George’s quick decision to flee Weed, basically saved Lennie’s life.  Not only is George there to solve problems he is also there to prevent problems.  When Lennie doesn’t remember that George has his work card he is frantic because he thinks he lost it.  With Lennie being very forgetful and disorganized, he doesn’t know what he has or doesn’t have, but he has George to make sure everythings in check.  Lennie looks up to George and is his anchor in life.

Ms. D
10/18/2013 04:46:18 am

This has some very nice elements in it - I like your "Not only" sentence as it is a good transition to your next idea. This is well done and I would only suggest a proofread for a few errors in conventions.

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